Meaningless Crap: The Shit Begins

So I posted my story piece by piece over the past week, and as I typed it up from what I wrote I realized, I was a really bad writer. I swapped from past tense to present tense, flipped on character identities, and couldn’t compile sentences correctly. Thinking about it, I still can’t. But be that as it may I believe I’ve gotten better at writing. I’ll leave that judgement for yourself.
Reading the story as I typed it up, I loved the minor and major references to inside jokes (I did edit a couple out, for example the fat woman and man had the names of real people, but I omitted them in the name of making sense) and while the story was fracture and incomplete I did thoroughly enjoy it.
As for the extremely subtle open ended nature of the end of the story, I’d explained that I did plan to write sequels of the stories, and who knows, I might. But for now, I reckon I’ll leave such sleeping dogs lie.

Here’s the chronological listing of the story’s posts:

• I want to tell a story (Introduction)
• Meaningless Crap: The Shit Begins (Page 1)
• Meaningless Crap: The Shit Begins (Page 2)
• Meaningless Crap: The Shit Begins (Page 3)
• Meaningless Crap: The Shit Begins (Page 4)
• Meaningless Crap: The Shit Begins (Page 5)